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Post by bluebrook3 on Jun 10, 2008 20:26:59 GMT -5
Name: Hollypaw Age: 10 moons Gender: she-cat Clan: Thunderclan Rank: Apprentice Appearance: Hollypaw is a beautiful dark blue tabby she-cat. She has light blue eyes that sparkle in the moonlight. Personality: She is a wise, strong, brave, kind and loving cat with everyone. She is devoted to her Clan but can be very mysterious at times. She will stand up for what she believes in, and will help a friend in need at any time. She can be quite friendly once you get to know her, but doesn't take too kindly to strangers. She loves Mountianpaw with all her heart even though they come from different clans. History: She was born to Cinderleaf(Mother) and Jayfeather(Father) of ThunderClan. Love Interest: Mountianpaw of Windclan. RP example: Hollypaw walked out of the apprentice into the cool fresh air after a heavy rainfall in Newleaf to get some fresh-kill to eat. She picked out a juicy fat mouse. After she finished, she looked out at the clear camp. Most of the cats were still in their dens. She though of maybe going hunting later with her mentor. Image:
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Post by Night on Jun 10, 2008 20:31:48 GMT -5
You should really add to the appeareance...
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Post by bluebrook3 on Jun 11, 2008 13:06:08 GMT -5
I added a little more to her.
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Post by Night on Jun 11, 2008 16:50:36 GMT -5
I should make you add two more sentences, but I'll slack off this time. Accepted
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