Karmapaw

[mkgb]

Name: Karmapaw

Age: 8 moons

Gender: she-cat

Clan: Riverclan

Rank: apprentice

Appearance:

Personality: Karmapaw is a impatient she-cat who can hold a grudge. Anyone who steps on her tail in the past will always be her enemy. She tends to look forward to learn new fighting moves then anything. She barely knows how to swim and her fishing is not the sharpest. Deep down she blood hungry but keeps it hidden from her clan mates.

History: As a kit she fell into trouble trying to fight with younger kits. Her violent actions sent her to live on the far side of the nursery away from all other kits. When she was 4 moons old she snuck out of camp and tried to fish only to catch a fish but was only to be draggd back from a senior warrior aftr half drowning. Other kits teased her about the accident bragging on their own skills even though they hadn't tried either. They got into a fight and Karmakit was punish severally by her mother. Now as a apprentice she tries not to cause trouble in hope her mentor will take her for training. She tends to find a small quarrel with her den mates.

[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

No kit would catch a fish if falling into a river. They'd have almost certainly drowned. Please change this.

[kelsey .]

accepted.

[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

Tilly, did you read my reply to her bio?

[kelsey .]

She changed it. I think. doesn't say she fell into a river and caught a fish. Says she caught a guppy.

[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

Kits can't catch fish, Tilly. Maybe she found one washed up and brought it back, but have you ever seen a 4-moon-old kit catch a fish? Or heard of it?

[kelsey .]

no. okay, okay, bringing this back to the bio board...

[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

Thanks, Tilly.

[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

~Accepted!~