Jadepaw and Keypaw

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• Name:Jadepaw and Keypaw
  
  
• Age:6 moons
  
  
• Gender:Female
  
  
• Clan:ThunderClan
  
  
• Rank:Apprentice
  
  
• Appearance:Jadepaw is a pure black female with jade green eyes. Her ears are tall and erect, with little whiskers coming out of the,. Her tail is also very long. Her pads are pink and smooth, bad for climbing.
  
  Keypaw is a pale grey female with blue green eyes.Her pelt is very illusive, like the moons, nearly silver and very bright. Her tail is very short, which lessons her balance, but her pads are rough, good for climbing. Her ears are also straight and alert, which means they have good hearing. Her chest has a mark looking like a key, thus her name.
  
  
• Personality:Jadepaw is the angel od the family. Her heart is full of charity, always helping out. As a kit, she was very docile, and her parents thought she had a lathargism disease. Turns out she was just a very good kit. She hates fighting of all kinds, but she's pretty good at it. She loves hunting, although she in not the best at it. She hates blood and pain, a reason why she is not a medicine cat. She wants to be remember in her Clan. Others think she is very annoying for being so good and excellent, but Jadepaw cannot help it. She believes in the warrior code way to much and bleeds when it is broken. Jadepaw is a good cat. she is sort of like a town wife, making cookies for charity and donating.
  
  If Jadepaw is the angel, Keypaw is the devil. She had broken the wariror code many times, though she does believe in it. Keypaw is a rebel, a rocker, and very clever. She loves war so much she could be the minister of it. She is pretty good at hunting thought she can't be quiet and sit still! Keypaw seems like a misfit, but she is actually very popular and well-liked. She makes friends easily, though sometimes she can be seen as embracesive and loud. Keypaw sometimes speaks and has dreams about a odd language that terrifies her. She believes her and Jadepaw were born far away from the forest where this odd language was spoke. Jadepaw always scoffs at this, but Keypaw believes. She digs to find out her history, though her history is deeply buried.
  
  
  
• History:
  
  Story
  helepruun rouge kiiresti tema kaudu prügikasti ja killustik. Kõva musta katte underpaw kriimustatud teda õrnalt, roosa paws ja tema sinine roheline silmis stared ees, täis mure ja kahetsusega. See emaste kasside tag oli Sagitta ja suur Vanttera tom kõrval ta oli tema sõber, Joker. Tema suust oli väike komplekt, valge, millele silmad nagu ise. Selleks Sagitta suu oli must komplekt koos Jade rohelised silmad, päritud Joker. Tema silmad shone, nagu seda tegi Sagitta's, kuid ta ei öelnud midagi. Nad sisenesid harbor ja Sagitta's orbs fixated on suur veolaev edasi. Tema paws teha väike prints on napid geograafia, ja ta raced ees, must komplekt kellega ta oli nimeks Tira wailing kõik aega. Teine komplekt, valge üks kellele ta tagged Nikita, oli vaikne, kuid tema silmad olid lai. Kergemate pruun kass sighed. Ta oli loobunud oma kits! Aga ta ei saaks hankida neid siin. Nad tahaks surevad väga kiiresti seas killustik ja söestunud metsast. Sagitta paigutatud Tira muldaviimiseks paat, ja kuulnud meeste helistab. Komplektid oli alustanud seal silmad ja kõrvad eelmisel nädalal ja Sagitta teadis ta, et need siit. Nad olid juba räägi keelt räägitakse siin, eriti valge kit, Nikita. Visklemine tema dial, Sagitta flicked oma kõrvu. "Ole hea. Ööbi ohutu." Ta piirneb kaugusel on paadi lase läbi kriiskamine, Joker järgmist. Kaevetööd tema küünised juurde geograafia, Sagitta pöördus ta nägu näha tema babes viimast korda. Tira suu oli O, nutt, nutt. Closing tema silmad, ta kaevasid ta küünised on keerulisem ja raskem. Joker oli raske hoida. Mida ma tegin? Tema meeles wailed.
  
  Translated
  The light brown rouge quickly made her way through the trash and rubble. The hard black pavement underpaw scratched her gentle, pink paws, and her blue green eyes stared ahead, full of worry and regret. This she-cats tag was Sagitta, and the big burly tom next to her was her mate, Joker. In his mouth was a small kit, a white one, with eyes like herself. In Sagitta's mouth was a black kit, with jade green eyes, inherited from Joker. His eyes shone, as did Sagitta's, but he didn't say anything. They entered the harbor, and Sagitta's orbs fixated on a big cargo boat ahead. Her paws made small prints in the scarce geography, and she raced ahead, the black kit whom she named Tira wailing all the while. The other kit, the pale grey/silver one whom she tagged Nikita, was silent but her eyes were wide. The lighter brown cat sighed. She was giving up her kits! But she couldn't raise them here. They'd die very quickly among the rubble and charred forests. Sagitta placed Tira onto the boat, and heard men calling. The kits had opened there eyes and ears last week, and Sagitta knew she had to get them out of here. They had already started to speak the language spoken here, especially the white kit, Nikita. Tossing her dial, Sagitta flicked her ears. "Be good. Stay safe." She bounded away as the boat let out a shriek, Joker following. Digging her claws into the geography, Sagitta turned her visage to see her babes one last time. Tira mouth was an O, crying, crying. Closing her eyes, she dug her claws in harder and harder. Joker was struggling to keep up. What have I done? Her mind wailed.
  
  Jadepaw and Keypaw ere born far away in a land called Estonia, where a different language was spoken. Their mother, Sagitta, tried to raise them in the dingy alleys she and her mate, Joker, roamed, but it was impossible. She had heard of the harbor and the cargo boatr that came every month, and decided to put her kits on the boat, in hopes for a better life. Then named Tira and Nikita, the kits had no idea what was going on. When the cargo ship docked, the two kits were found, very sick, after malnourishment. They were sent to Twolegplace, where they escaped at 4 moons old and joined ThunderClan. They plan to stay there forever.
  
  **This bio took me three times to write. The other two times it got deleted -.- Enjoy!
  

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