Post by flameh on Jul 4, 2008 8:07:17 GMT -5
Name: Ravenpaw
Age: 30 moons
Gender: Tom-cat
Clan: ThunderClan - Loner
Rank: Loner
Appearence: Ravenpaw is a sleek, black tomcat with a white splotch on his chest. He has a long, thin black tail with a white tip, snow against coal. Bright amber eyes glow out from under a fringe of black fur, and big, pointed ears. Despite once being a scrawny ThunderClan apprentice, he is now a muscular tom with lithe muscles beneath his short dark fur.
Personality: Ravenpaw is a loyal tom to his friends, and a savage fighter to his enemies. When first meeting others, he is friendly, but with a wary edge underneath - if the new aquaintaince is accompanied by an old friend, Ravenpaw almost immediately trusts them. When facing old enemies, Ravenpaw holds grudges and does not forgive easily. Otherwise, he a peaceful tom, honest and fair; when it comes to hunting, Ravenpaw is an incredible stalker, with soft pads that make no noise against the honey-gold hay in the barn where he lives.
History: Born to a ThunderClan queen alongside his sister Rosekit, Ravenkit never suspected any trouble from within his Clan. He was the usual, mischevious kit with his sister but he never took the lead, preferring to follow; when she died of GreenCough the Leaf-Bare before they're apprenticeship, Ravenkit was extremely depressed. Any thought of mischief afterwards was brought to a halt as he neared his apprenticeship His mentor, Tigerstar, did not allow any tomfoolery, and scared Ravenpaw into obedience. At the battle with RiverClan, the very battle where Redtail was killed, Ravenpaw witnessed something that seemed to scar him deeply; his mentor murdering the deputy in cold blood. He fled to camp, yowling that Redtail had been killed, but was ushered to Spottedleaf's den before he could say much else. Later at the next Gathering, he told the story to several apprentices from ShadowClan and RiverClan, none of which believed him; however, his mentor had been giving him the evil, amber eye recently and Ravenpaw was becoming quite jumpy around Tigerclaw. This, in turn, ruined his training, and Tigerclaw gave him up as a failure. Trying to please his mentor but only coming up short, Ravenpaw spent more time with Graypaw and the newcomer, Firepaw, and the three quickly became good friends. For one of Ravenpaw's assessments, he was sent by Tigerclaw into ShadowClan territory for prey. After Tigerclaw had manipulated cats in the Clan to think Ravenpaw was a traitor, Fireheart and Graystripe took him away from the Forest to live with Barley, a loner who had helped them previously. Fireheart and Graystripe told the Clan that Ravenpaw had been slain by a ShadowClan patrol, and he was then presumed dead by ThunderClan. Afterwards, once Tigerclaw had been shown for the traitor that he was, Ravenpaw slowly overcame his fear for the tabby tom and went from a skinny, scared apprentice to a lithe, well-fed loner. He has helped the Clans, especially Firestar and ThunderClan, many times over since then.
Age: 30 moons
Gender: Tom-cat
Clan: ThunderClan - Loner
Rank: Loner
Appearence: Ravenpaw is a sleek, black tomcat with a white splotch on his chest. He has a long, thin black tail with a white tip, snow against coal. Bright amber eyes glow out from under a fringe of black fur, and big, pointed ears. Despite once being a scrawny ThunderClan apprentice, he is now a muscular tom with lithe muscles beneath his short dark fur.
Personality: Ravenpaw is a loyal tom to his friends, and a savage fighter to his enemies. When first meeting others, he is friendly, but with a wary edge underneath - if the new aquaintaince is accompanied by an old friend, Ravenpaw almost immediately trusts them. When facing old enemies, Ravenpaw holds grudges and does not forgive easily. Otherwise, he a peaceful tom, honest and fair; when it comes to hunting, Ravenpaw is an incredible stalker, with soft pads that make no noise against the honey-gold hay in the barn where he lives.
History: Born to a ThunderClan queen alongside his sister Rosekit, Ravenkit never suspected any trouble from within his Clan. He was the usual, mischevious kit with his sister but he never took the lead, preferring to follow; when she died of GreenCough the Leaf-Bare before they're apprenticeship, Ravenkit was extremely depressed. Any thought of mischief afterwards was brought to a halt as he neared his apprenticeship His mentor, Tigerstar, did not allow any tomfoolery, and scared Ravenpaw into obedience. At the battle with RiverClan, the very battle where Redtail was killed, Ravenpaw witnessed something that seemed to scar him deeply; his mentor murdering the deputy in cold blood. He fled to camp, yowling that Redtail had been killed, but was ushered to Spottedleaf's den before he could say much else. Later at the next Gathering, he told the story to several apprentices from ShadowClan and RiverClan, none of which believed him; however, his mentor had been giving him the evil, amber eye recently and Ravenpaw was becoming quite jumpy around Tigerclaw. This, in turn, ruined his training, and Tigerclaw gave him up as a failure. Trying to please his mentor but only coming up short, Ravenpaw spent more time with Graypaw and the newcomer, Firepaw, and the three quickly became good friends. For one of Ravenpaw's assessments, he was sent by Tigerclaw into ShadowClan territory for prey. After Tigerclaw had manipulated cats in the Clan to think Ravenpaw was a traitor, Fireheart and Graystripe took him away from the Forest to live with Barley, a loner who had helped them previously. Fireheart and Graystripe told the Clan that Ravenpaw had been slain by a ShadowClan patrol, and he was then presumed dead by ThunderClan. Afterwards, once Tigerclaw had been shown for the traitor that he was, Ravenpaw slowly overcame his fear for the tabby tom and went from a skinny, scared apprentice to a lithe, well-fed loner. He has helped the Clans, especially Firestar and ThunderClan, many times over since then.
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