mkgb
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Post by mkgb on Jul 7, 2009 20:26:33 GMT -5
Over the tallest hill of the moor sat a boulder. It lay flat and tall, looking over the land of Windclan. It stretches endless for the eye can see. The soft wind that blew at the high peek brought smells of distant cats and rabbit. There on top of the boulder sat the tom that seems to try so hard not to fit in. His body was thicker than his senior den mates who walking in lengthy steps, fast against the wind. His paws weighed down by thick blunt claws that even without a sharp edge gave a killer attack.
He looked over the moor, in hope to find a she-cat that he waited on in his mind. His heart sped up in thought of the she-cat, her name just as delightful as her looks. Her name was Smokepaw, a cat of his dreams. The tom listen on the wind but fake hopes came from it as it whispered so lightly in song like voice, “Alderfrost”.
Alderfrost drew his claws out to sharper them against the rock. Dark marking carved the stone as he passed the claws quickly. His eyes didn’t leave the far off, his senses all clear for any new arrivers. Though he knew he most was looking for Smokepaw, he was prepared for anyone. The rabbit ran good close by so it wasn’t a rare occasion to see the cats running past in pursuit of a juicy rabbit. Finally after a while he saw the silhouette of a cat, walking forward. His heart pounded heart as he hoped for Smokepaw but the shape was still blurring.
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Post by Spottedleaf ~Dapps on Jul 7, 2009 20:59:31 GMT -5
[[Eep! Any time someone posts seeing a ca I have an urge to make it somebody else. -headdesk-]]
Thistlepaw had been wandering about for quite some time. She'd attempted hunting, she'd tried to sleep, but her sister's eager face kept flickering through her mind. Smokepaw was never excited for anything, and then suddenly she was so eager to get her apprentice name that it seemed too unusual. Thistlepaw's mind swam and she frustratedly kicked a stray stone off into the distance, suddenly noticing that another cat sat off in the distance. Maybe she could talk out her problems. That usually worked. So still thinking about how annoyed not knowing made her and wondering what was up with her sister Smokepaw, she approached Alderfrost with a grim smile. "Hey, Alderfrost." She said softly.
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Post by mkgb on Jul 7, 2009 21:50:49 GMT -5
[that's alright I wanted it to be a surprise like a normal cat not knowing who there]
Alderfrost looked down at Thistlepaw with a fake smile. Though he wasn’t one to talk to talk normally this was Smokepaw sister. He knew if he was to ignore her something would be brought back to his love, Smokepaw. “Hello Thistlepaw”, he meowed in his normal deep voice. It was the kind of voice that was not normal for a cat his age but he fit it well. “Is your mentor around?”, he asked sending his opposite claw against the rock. Bit of pebbles flew from the rock as it slide in long streaks. HE looked up to catch Trustlepaw eyes, “Something the matter?”
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