Emberpaw of SC

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Emberpaw is a kind she-cat. She is very cheerful and different. She loves to spread joy and sometimes wants to escape from the hate filled ShadowClan. She is extremely firendly and wants to be everyones friend. She is extremely clumsy and often has trouble putting one paw in front of the other.


Emberpaw was born to Shimmerpelt and Harefur. She had two siblings, Ravekit and Smallkit. She was always the different kit, friendly and loving. Ravekit and Smallkit were tough tom kits who had the ShadowClan spirit. Her mother Shimmerpelt loved her personality, her father was disgusted. When she was apprenticed, she wanted to prove herself but only proved to be clumsy. She is an embaressment to her father and brothers. She is constantly being picked on by Ravepaw and Smallpaw, even though shes the oldest. She has been known to run over borders, trying to escape but always failing. She is yet to find a reason to stay in ShadowClan.


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[Spottedleaf ~Dapps]

Can you add a bit more to the History? Or at least lengthen the sentences.

Also, make the image link more noticeable. At first I didn't get it.

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